Sunday, March 2, 2014

The American World After 9/11

On the Morning of September 11th, an al Qaeda group hijacked four commercial airplanes and carried out the deadliest terrorist attack in history on American soil. On this tragic day two airplanes were flown into the world trade center buildings, another into the pentagon with the third failing its attack on Washington and crashed in an open field in Pennsylvania. This day has will forever be a dark day in American history; furthermore these events launched us into the longest war in US history, as well as changing all aspects of American life. From a complete invasion of our privacy with the passing of the patriot act, to a constant fear of future unexpected terrorist attacks the government has the American people in anxiety and dependent on the government, which is right where they want them.
Since the attacks of 9/11 the government has significantly escaladed its level of security, some argue that such actions were an overreaction, but it absolutely was a necessity. From the forming of the Transportation Security Administration better known as the TSA, to the expansion of the National Security Agency (NSA) the government is now able to monitor at a larger scale, and has a better ability to prevent future terrorist attacks, as well as monitor possible terrorist and their connections. Additionally to advancements in such security measures, America has made tremendous strides on the war on terrorism, besides the claimed victory in Iraq, the US has killed Osama bin Laden and has been victorious in fighting the Taliban in Afghanistan.
It would be foolish to argue that we are not in some aspects safer than we were pre 9/11, but how much safer are we really and at what cost are we achieving this level of security? It has been estimated that annually the NSA has a budget of 10 billion dollars, which comes directly from taxpayers. This of course is an approximation, due to the fact that the NSA falls under a protected category of “black” programs and its actual spending and budged is top secret. Along with this ridiculous spending, Americans have lost almost all of their privacy, thanks to this patriot act which was passed on by the government as absolutely paramount to our security, the NSA now has the ability to tap every USA citizen as they wish, with out really getting a consent from the American people.
Since the war on terrorism commenced in 2001, the US has spent a total of 1.492 trillion dollars, not only has it had little success with its mission, it has drastically been a factor to our developing debt. In addition to this financial problem, the war has had a greater cost that is unacceptable, with the death toll of 4,800 killed and 31,965 wounded in Iraq, with an additionally 2,229 killed with 18,675 wounded in Afghanistan, American families continue to struggle with struggles of war, while the government appears to have moved on to spying on its own citizens. Having sacrificed so much we should expect remarkable victories on the “war on terror” but as we have recently seen, much has been paid in vain. Having ended all military operations in Iraq and empowering its military and police to take control of the city, al-Qaeda forces have reclaimed the city of Fallujah, and have been carrying extremely violent attacks in Baghdad, which gives little credibility to the US in its actions in Iraq, and gives little hope for its future in Afghanistan.
The United States government might claim victory over the war on terrorism, but when taking into account the drastic cost it has had on the US economy and the sacrifice made by its people, there doesn’t seem much to celebrate over. Furthermore the American people has unwillingly lost its privacy, and have found themselves living under a microscope while paying for a war that not many support and all hope it soon comes to an end.



References  
Amadeo, K. 2014. What Are the Facts About the War on Terror Costs. [online] Available at: http://useconomy.about.com/od/usfederalbudget/f/War_on_Terror_Facts.htm [Accessed: 3 Mar 2014].
Sahadi, J. 2014. What the NSA costs taxpayers. [online] Available at: http://money.cnn.com/2013/06/07/news/economy/nsa-surveillance-cost/ [Accessed: 3 Mar 2014].
Statisticbrain.com. 2014. U.S. War Death Statistics | Statistic Brain. [online] Available at: http://www.statisticbrain.com/u-s-war-death-statistics/ [Accessed: 3 Mar 2014].
Washington Post. 2014. Al-Qaeda force captures Fallujah, site of bloodiest battle of Iraq war. [online] Available at: http://www.washingtonpost.com/world/al-qaeda-force-captures-fallujah-amid-rise-in-violence-in-iraq/2014/01/03/8abaeb2a-74aa-11e3-8def-a33011492df2_story.html [Accessed: 3 Mar 2014].

1 comment:

  1. Andres,

    Very well-written and informative post. You educate your readers with lots of knowledge and history in this piece. You also include some great facts and figures, that give some great background information for people to digest.

    I would like to see you now take those facts and sew them into your argument - all throughout your post. Use those facts to fuel your argument or discredit the opposing viewpoint (in this case, those people/political parties) that support the wars, are ok with the NSA and Patriot Act, and generally feel that more protection is better.

    I'd like to see your posts get stronger with a solid thesis. This post is excellent, but it doesn't seem too persuasive. It's more informative. Your post should be a strong argument that you eventually win in the final paragraph.

    This post is great as an introduction to the topic. You wrote a great, newspaper-like article. Your pictures and your design are great - it looks very professional.

    Just try to make your argument more clear. Let your thesis - the answer to the question: did the US overreact? - lead the entire discussion.


    Overall, great work. Keep it up! You're putting great thought and effort into each week, and it shows by the professionalism in your writing.

    Try to take my suggestions and improve each week.


    GR: 93

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